There you go, Which made it to 13 pages in the end, in the first draft anyway.
Got stuck at one point and realised that it wasn't working with just the two groups because they are both good guys and there was insufficient plot to have them at each other's throats. Instead I brought in a bad guy from the Sarah Jane Adventures to be the cause of the trouble.
I'm pretty pleased with it as it stands, obviously it needs going through a couple of times and smoothing out. I expect there are additional emotions I can bring out. I also need to see if I can fit in "There's no place like home" comfortably - I really want it and there is one character that can say it but it didn't fit the flow at any point.
Joy joy feeling. Be well, citizen.
What's on the turntable? "I close my eyes and count to ten" by Dusty Springfield
Behold it was written!
Excellent stuff man. Whats next? re-writes of this or you letting it process and moving on to something else for the moment?
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